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Games


Burning eyes.


Twisted smile.


Loyal, loving.


Cruel to a fault.


She watches you, studies you


Don't blink, don't think, because it's weakness.


Don't speak, don't hesitate, because she wants you to.


Don't smile, don't let it show, because that's breaking the rules.


It's you little game, you and her, for so long you can even remember.


You don't remember when it started, how it started, why it started,


But it's always been this way.


She grins.


You glare.


Her eyes blaze.


Doesn't matter who fires the first insult.


Doesn't matter who throws the first punch.


It's just you and her, fist to fist, bones cracking,


Blood and sweat and pain.


She's seen your dreams and fears.


You've seen her hopes and tears.


You love each other


Except when you hate each other


And you'll keep fighting


Because it's just a game.

©2009-2010 ~GreatWTF
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Author's Comments

Okay... how to explain this...?

I scratched this out when I was really bored back in high school, something to make my brother smile when he was having a really crappy day. He's always laughed at the relationship between my two characters, Elektra and Oedipus Gray, because the two have the epitome of a love/hate relationship. They really do try to kill each other from time to time, but their rivalry is usually what leads to them both becoming stronger and thus being able to protect their family.

Elektra and Ed thrive on irritating, tormenting, and otherwise abusing each other, but in typical rival fashion, there's no one alive that knows them better than each other.

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:iconmondfluch:
Well err, thought flakes? (D: sorry, I really don't know a English word ^^; Hah, fail!) But I like this~! The emotions. I'm a great fan of love&hate relationships..:]
:icongreatwtf:
Well, we both fail in that case because I have no idea what thought flakes should be. ^_^

I have far too much fun with Ed and Elektra's relationship, I swear these two would be lovers if they didn't hate each other so much.

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I love writing (and reading) about lovehate relationships. They're just so...intreaging, possibly because I used to have the same problem with the guy I love. I love him, but we fight so much, it's enjoyable.

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"It's four o'clock in the morning, damn it, listen to me good...You're a butterfly, and butterflies are free to fly. Fly away, high away, bye bye."

~Elton John "Someone Saved My Life Tonight"
:iconevanescentwednesday:
Ooh, I like that... Very well written :D

Bahaha. Elektra's and Ed's love-hate relationship is entertaining XD

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Call me Harley, everyone does!

"I am NOT a doormat!"

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:icongreatwtf:
^_^ Gotta love the things my brain comes up with. And remind me to show you my sketch book the next time you come over, I've got this hilarious picture of Ed and Elektra spawned by this bizarre story Damian asked me for and watching Cynthia pinning Justin down and tying bows in his hair.

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:icongreatwtf:
Lovehate relationships are always fun to write. I enjoy writing Ed and Elektra because they really do take it to an extreme. They've come within inches of killing each other and the only reason they don't most of the time is because their brothers stop them, or they have to stop killing each other in favor of killing the bad guy.

And of course there are those other random moments when the fights go in the opposite direction and their brothers have to separate them for fear of compounding the already present incest in their family.

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:iconevanescentwednesday:
XDDDDDD Ooh! I wanna see it! :D

When's the next time I'm gonna see you, Tamaki? XDD

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Avatar belongs to ~ArtNerdEm :D

Call me Harley, everyone does!

"I am NOT a doormat!"

A proud member of ~HarleyQuinnFC
:icongreatwtf:
Dunno. Free time is nonexistent right now, but I might be able to kidnap you over the weekend.

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:iconevanescentwednesday:
Yay!!!

I dunno if I'll be going to Al's or not; I'll let you know tomorrow, but if not, then... either kidnap from school or my house? My old house (cause that's where I'm living XD)? :D

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Avatar belongs to ~ArtNerdEm :D

Call me Harley, everyone does!

"I am NOT a doormat!"

A proud member of ~HarleyQuinnFC

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